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Ch5 pg43

March 28th, 2017, 10:00 pm

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Reply M.W, March 28th, 2017, 10:00 pm

Boy am I glad for my immensely big buffer, otherwise I would not be able to keep up with fan intake.

Buffer size: 13

So with the chapter end, I ask. How did this chapter compare with the others. Better? Worse? Definitely worse? Different? Comment on your opinion.

Reply Advertisement, November 20th, 2017, 3:41 am

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Reply WildfireK, March 29th, 2017, 9:30 am

@M.W:
Well, I think this chapter was more of a flow chapter. That is, it wasn't overly tense like a climax, and it didn't introduce us to a ton of new things like a prolouge or first chapter, so it was more of a chapter that just progressed the story...
And I like that! :D

I think that the dialouge could be improved a little more, but I don't know. You've got intercharacter conversation down, it's just having characters talk to themselves every two panels can kind of feel awkward and unwieldy sometimes...

Anyway, it was a great chapter! It did its job well -- to progress the story. :D

Reply M.W, March 30th, 2017, 1:46 am

@WildfireK:
Yeah, Dialogue for me is clunky because I don't plan the dialogue...only the story. The story is meant to progress here quite fast (43 pages is fast yes).

Thanks for your feedback.

Reply WildfireK, March 30th, 2017, 8:09 am

@M.W:
Really? Same.
I don't plan the dialogue except in really important moments... so I can't really say anything

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