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Ch1 pg21

November 6th, 2015, 6:40 pm

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That's why she helped him. She wanted to see Lief, her mentor, again.
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Reply M.W, November 6th, 2015, 6:40 pm

This closes the first chapter of AIV. So...what do you guys think. Was this chapter good? Bad? Why?

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User's Comments:

Reply SilverNinetales, November 7th, 2015, 6:38 am

It was ok.
The plot was kinda complicated, and I had to reread this comic to remember stuff.

Reply M.W, November 7th, 2015, 6:20 pm

Yeah, I kinda threw too much at the reader in terms of plot. Too many mysteries unsolved.

Why would Racheal be kidnapped?
Where is Lief?
Where did Keaton go?
Why are these evil Pokemon asking Stanley for help?

Hopefully the next few chapters will be much more simple. Basing on only one of these elements...I hope.
Thanks for your feedback.

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